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I'm cranking out the necessary changes to draft an AERA paper proposal. It required a somewhat painful realization that some big things had to change. Instead of asking an empirical question, I had to assert what I was doing conceptually. Instead of debating the pros and cons of multiple theories, I need to argue the benefits and hindrances of organizational learning theory. Instead of writing about the holes in potential findings, I will describe the relevance of potential findings. The best news- I have a new title, Prying Open the Black Box. Second best news- I'm noticing some strengths in this paper and am generating some new ideas, oddly related to the cat in the box and quantum mechanics!